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Nowadays a lot of children study in coeducation. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays a lot of children study in coeducation. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 75M85

It is quite imperative to say that, education of our children should be our top priorities. Recently number of schools offer coeducation they have different effect some of positive or negative. In this essay we will discuss cons and pros of coeducation system and at the end we draw the conclusion and our opinion. The key advantage is coeducation is help the young adults to boost their confidence and communication skills with opposite sex, and pupil know how to respect other genders in their campuses such as we see that the student of coeducation academy is more confident, and well behave attitude. Moreover, its better way to prepare the children's for modern society, and teacher taught the youngster to respect the different sex in the co-schools On the other hand if we talk about disadvantages of the co-campuses, first one is students are not proper focuses on their studies and involve in relationships in very small ages instance in USA the co-academies result rate is lower than separate same gender schools yet the coeducation also bed impact on the education of young students, and secondly some male pupils misbehave with their co-female class follows, and it's hard to control to school management there is the example of my own country some boy's attitude is not appreciable for girls in the co-schools. In the end, it is quite natural to say that there a number of advantages and disadvantages of co-studies. The students of coeducation system are more open-minded, and more settled on the other side there are also some bed points while like co-institution effect on their schooling therefore, from my point of view co-schooling are the lot of benefits if we make proper structure, and rules.

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