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Today, I’m going to talk about a language I have learned. 5 years ago, my mom took me to France when she had a long vacation on Tet. When we arrived in Paris, we were extremely excited as Paris had a lot of magnificent architecture. In there, humans were amicable and lovable, they were given out a hand whenever we had difficulty. After this trip, I loved France so much, so I made the decision to study French. I started learning French when I was 16 years old. Initially, I had a lot of difficulties as I didn’t know where to start learning, I was very confused. I went on Youtube and found a video which taught French. After a few days, I felt deeply depressed because it was very hard. However, I never gave up, I made up my mind to find a course. I keened on studying with my teacher and my friend. We practised pronouncing it with my friend. Subsequently, I felt that I studied better than before. Besides, I joined a language exchange club to exercise. It was so much fun as I made friends with many people to have knowledge about the customs and culture of France. I think French is not too hard if you study with a trainer. French is an enjoyable language and appropriate for everyone. You can try it to have a good command of linguistics. Thanks to studying French, I have more opportunities at work, I also become more confident. In future, I wish I could live in France
Today
, I’m going to talk about a language I have learned. 5 years ago, my mom took me to France when she had a long vacation on Tet. When we arrived in Paris, we were
extremely
excited as Paris had
a lot of
magnificent architecture. In there, humans were amicable and lovable, they were
given
out a hand whenever we had difficulty. After this trip, I
loved
France
so
much,
so
I made the decision to study French.

I
started
learning French when I was 16 years
old
.
Initially
, I had
a lot of
difficulties as I didn’t know where to
start
learning, I was
very
confused. I went on
Youtube
and found a video which taught French. After a few days, I felt
deeply
depressed
because
it was
very
hard
.
However
, I never gave up, I made up my mind to find a course. I keened on studying with my teacher and my friend. We
practised
pronouncing it with my friend.
Subsequently
, I felt that I studied better than
before
.
Besides
, I
joined
a language exchange club to exercise. It was
so
much fun as I made friends with
many
people
to have knowledge about the customs and culture of France.

I
think
French is not too
hard
if you study with a trainer. French is an enjoyable language and appropriate for everyone. You can try it to have a
good
command of linguistics.

Thanks to studying French, I have more opportunities at work, I
also
become more confident.
In future
, I wish I could
live
in
France
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IELTS essay describe a language you have learned

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
258 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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