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Damily rules when your friend visit your house

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The first is respecting each other’s privacy rights. It is the most important rule in my family. Some things you should note, before entering someone’s room you should enter the door, do not arbitrarily enter the room and touch other people’s things without permission. Especially taboo is spying on diaries, texting or eavesdropping on other people’s phones. Respecting each other’s privacy rights will create a comfortable space for each individual, creating trust and respect for each other in the family. Second, do not affect people. For example, do not smoke in the house. Smoking not only affects your health but also affects everyone around you. It is also noted that not only too loud sound at rest will affect each person’s private space and time. Third, after use need to return to the old position. Especially the electrical and water appliances need to be turned off after being used to save money. Instruments such as controls should return to their correct position to make them easier to find. Last but not least, there’s always a mandatory weekend get-together at home. This is the time to sit down and talk to each other, share joys and sorrows and difficulties or express your own opinions. It’s also my favorite rule. Because the food is delicious and I get to talk to my mom. It’s the most fun time of the week, I get to let go of the pressure and have fun with my family. I think you’ll like it as much as I do.
The
first
is respecting each
other’s
privacy rights. It is the most
important
rule
in my family.
Some
things you should note,
before
entering someone’s room you should enter the door, do not
arbitrarily
enter the room and touch
other
people
’s things without permission.
Especially
taboo is spying on diaries, texting or eavesdropping on
other
people
’s phones. Respecting each
other’s
privacy rights will create a comfortable space for each individual, creating trust and respect for each
other
in the family.

Second, do not
affect
people
.
For example
, do not smoke in the
house
. Smoking not
only
affects
your health
but
also
affects
everyone around you. It is
also
noted that not
only
too loud sound at rest will
affect
each person’s private space and time.

Third, after
use
need to return to the
old
position.
Especially
the electrical and water appliances need to
be turned
off after being
used
to save money. Instruments such as controls should return to their correct position to
make
them easier to find.

Last
but
not least, there’s always a mandatory weekend
get
-together at home. This is the time to sit down and talk to each
other
, share joys and sorrows and difficulties or express your
own
opinions. It’s
also
my favorite
rule
.
Because
the food is delicious and I
get
to talk to my mom. It’s the most fun time of the week, I
get
to
let
go of the pressure and have fun with my family. I
think
you’ll like it as much as I do.
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IELTS essay Damily rules when your friend visit your house

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
253 words
6.0
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