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now negative impact of human activity can be reduce

now negative impact of human activity can be reduce 5Ao8p
now negative impact of human activity can be reduce. many people think that human activity are rais every year in around the world and cant pay attion on negative impact. while other people belive that we can reduce negative impact of human activity with 2 way, first way relate to govermant control and second way do with people control. see I agree with the second idea, I think government and people can change or reduce negative impact of human activity because the system of factory will be up date and they can control this with tax on old system and people help this issue with monotoring.
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IELTS essay now negative impact of human activity can be reduce

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
106 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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