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Now days people are turning towards the fast food as compared to a fast do you think its advantage outweigh disadvantage

Now days people are turning towards the fast food as compared to a fast do you think its advantage outweigh disadvantage 6Kr9K
To begin with now a days more of member likes fast food because to manage time-consuming. According to our expectations, the number of fast-food restaurants also increasing rapidly. In my opinion about this fast foods are mostly health one compared to ordinary meals because this kind of food is prepared by using fresh vegetable salad so it gives us a healthy life and long life to that is the main reason for people looking for fast food more compared to other for example quick food are playing major role it school students who stayting away from their home and staying outside they didn't have that much of time to prepare normal because they need to spend more Number of times to prepare the food due to that their studies times leads to less time
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IELTS essay Now days people are turning towards the fast food as compared to a fast do you think its advantage outweigh disadvantage

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
133 words
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