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Now a lot of people in college are doing academic study.we should encourage them to learn vocational skill.

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In 21 century, practical knowledge and University study are becoming more vital in light of the fact that manufacturers do choose their employees base on their academic skills and vocational education. Plethora of crowd believe in college study but some people should motivate them to learn experimental art. I personally agree with this view that will be discussed. On the one hand, all students should continue their study after 12th owing to the fact that qualification will become more critical for their future and also will get gigantic job base on their qualification. Students will enter in many profession if they have a degree. For instance, become scientists, become doctor, become teacher, etc. People can get degree altogether they can get decipline between three or four years of college. On the other hand, pupils do Start learn practical knowledge. For example, plumbing, electrician, mobile repairing, etc. Doing this, people becoming more independent and afford their own expenses altogether they will buy able to own house and support their family. student should do some job because they can take knowledge about their profession before academic study. For instance, report of THE TIME OF INDIA that 72 percent students have taken practical knowledge before college study. To sum up, practical knowledge and university study are more beneficial for youngster because both fector are critical part of cariar, that I personally believe.
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21 century
,
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practical
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knowledge
and University
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study
are becoming more vital in light of the fact that manufacturers do choose their employees base on their academic
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skills
and vocational education. Plethora of crowd believe in college
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study
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some
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people
should motivate them to learn experimental art. I
personally
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agree
with this view that will
be discussed
. On the one hand, all
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students
should continue their
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study
after 12th owing to the fact that qualification will
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become
more critical for their future and
also
will
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get
gigantic job base on their qualification.
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Students
will enter in
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many
profession if they have a degree.
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,
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become
scientists,
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become
doctor,
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become
teacher, etc.
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People
can
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get
degree altogether they can
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get
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decipline
between three or four years of college.
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, pupils do
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learn
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practical
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knowledge
.
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, plumbing, electrician, mobile repairing, etc. Doing this,
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people
becoming more independent and afford their
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own
expenses altogether they will
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buy
able to
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own
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house
and support their family.
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student
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some
job
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because
they can take
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knowledge
about their profession
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before
academic
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study
.
For instance
, report of THE TIME OF INDIA that 72 percent
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students
have taken
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practical
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knowledge
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before
college
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study
. To sum up,
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practical
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knowledge
and university
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study
are more beneficial for youngster
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because
both
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are critical part of
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, that I
personally
believe.
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IELTS essay Now a lot of people in college are doing academic study. we should encourage them to learn vocational skill.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
229 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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