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When you have written a plan, you then need to turn your notes into full sentences. Let's try this using the paragraph plan below.

When you have written a plan, you then need to turn your notes into full sentences. Let's try this using the paragraph plan below. lWDX9
In my opinion, high street shops are disappearing due to competition from online shopping websites, which are cheaper and more convenient. Web-based stores allow customers to search for the best deals, make purchases from the comfort of their homes, and receive delivery of their purchased items the next day. Furthermore, it is impossible for traditional bricks-and-mortar stores to compete with the range of choice that can be found online. For example, I recently used the website Amazon to buy some fairly rare academic textbooks that were not stocked at my local bookshop. As a customer, the fact that I can find any product imaginable online makes it almost pointless for me to make a trip to my local high street.
In my opinion, high street shops are disappearing due to competition from online shopping websites, which are cheaper and more convenient. Web-based stores
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
customers to search for the best deals,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchases
from the comfort of their homes, and receive delivery of their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
items the
next
day.
Furthermore
, it is impossible for traditional bricks-and-mortar stores to compete with the range of choice that can
be found
online.
For example
, I recently
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
the website Amazon to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
fairly
rare academic textbooks that were not stocked at my local bookshop. As a customer, the fact that I can find any product imaginable online
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
it almost pointless for me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a trip to my local high street.

IELTS essay When you have written a plan, you then need to turn your notes into full sentences. Let's try this using the paragraph plan below.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
120 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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