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Now a days employees are important or not? Describe reasons.

An employee is a term for workers and managers working for a company, organization or community. These people are the staff of the organization. In general, any person hired by an employer to do a particular job in exchange for payment is an employee, but there are different kinds of employees. In some countries, employers are required by law to do certain things, like obey minimum wage laws, provide a safe workplace, and sometimes pay a tax. Employers also have to give their official employees benefits, like paying for health insurance. Because of this, some employers like to hire independent contractors to do work instead of regular employees.
An
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employee
is a term for workers and managers working for a
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company
, organization or community. These
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people
are the staff of the organization.
In general
, any person hired by an
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employer
to do a particular job in exchange for payment is an
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employee
,
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there are
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different
kinds of
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. In
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some
countries,
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employers
are required
by law to do certain things, like obey minimum wage laws, provide a safe workplace, and
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sometimes
pay a tax.
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Employers
also
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have to
give their official
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employees
benefits, like paying for health insurance.
Because of this
,
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some
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employers
like to hire independent contractors to do work
instead
of regular
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employees
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IELTS essay Now a days employees are important or not? Describe reasons.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
108 words
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