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My self describe reasons.

I am shubhaam gupta. i am 18 years old. my family is short. I’m Vipul Konar, and I am 7 years old. I study at Delhi Public School in the fourth standard. My father’s name is Mr. Adhitya Konar, and my mother’s name is Mrs. Alar Konar. I have one younger sister who studies in the first standard in the same school. I like watching cartoons, and my favorite cartoon character is Sinchan. I also love playing Indoor games with my sister. And, I love playing cricketwith my friends.
I am shubhaam gupta. i am 18 years
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. my family is short. I’m Vipul Konar, and I am 7 years
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.

I study at Delhi Public School in the fourth standard.

My father’s name is Mr. Adhitya Konar, and my mother’s name is Mrs. Alar Konar.

I have one younger sister who studies in the
first
standard in the same school.

I like watching cartoons, and my favorite cartoon character is Sinchan.

I
also
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love
playing Indoor games with my sister. And, I
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love
playing cricketwith my friends.

IELTS essay My self describe reasons.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
89 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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