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Not only parents but also a lot of students is often concerned about choosing between public school with private school for the best academy

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Not only parents but also a lot of students is often concerned about choosing between public school with private school for the best academy. So what are the similarities the differences? Follow the article below to find out the right choice for yourself. Public school and private school are more different than you think. First of all, student will not pay a lot of money when studying public shool because they are supported by the government. On the contrary, you have to pay more money for activites, studying when you attend private school. Secondly, private school are more appreciates for the quality of learning, yet public school. Teachers' public school do not have enough time to control, understand thier student. Finally, diplomas from private schools that are more regarded, you will easy get employ. In contrast, after graduate public school, you will get hard to have a good job. In the conclusion, you do not have to worry too much about this choice. It is not as important as which school you study
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IELTS essay Not only parents but also a lot of students is often concerned about choosing between public school with private school for the best academy

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
172 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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