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Noise pollution in the city where I live

Noise pollution in the city where I live DNNY7
In today's era, noise pollution has always been a big problem for us. The progress of society has brought more and more noise. Noise has many disadvantages: it can make people feel bad and do great harm to people's health. Such as the music resounding through the street at night, the traffic coming and going on the driveway. In order to reduce noise, we should try our best to travel in a green way and not do anything that produces noise
In
today
's era,
noise
pollution has always been a
big
problem for us. The progress of society has brought more and more
noise
.
Noise
has
many
disadvantages: it can
make
people
feel
bad
and do great harm to
people
's health. Such as the music resounding through the street at night, the traffic coming and going on the driveway. In order to
reduce
noise
, we should try our best to travel
in a green way
and not do anything that produces
noise
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IELTS essay Noise pollution in the city where I live

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
80 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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