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Noise pollution in the city where I live

Noise pollution in the city where I live DNNY7
In today's era, noise pollution has always been a big problem for us. The progress of society has brought more and more noise. Noise has many disadvantages: it can make people feel bad and do great harm to people's health. Such as the music resounding through the street at night, the traffic coming and going on the driveway. In order to reduce noise, we should try our best to travel in a green way and not do anything that produces noise
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pollution has always been a
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problem for us. The progress of society has brought more and more
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has
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many
disadvantages: it can
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make
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people
feel
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bad
and do great harm to
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people
's health. Such as the music resounding through the street at night, the traffic coming and going on the driveway. In order to
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reduce
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noise
, we should try our best to travel
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in a green way
and not do anything that produces
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noise

IELTS essay Noise pollution in the city where I live

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
80 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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