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Nobody will buy printed newspapers or books in the future

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Our society became more and more digitalized in many aspects since Internet was invented. News papers and books are not the exception. In the past, people used to largely relay on the paper based publications as main information sources, also these publications are mostly subscribed or paid by people. However, some people say that these traditional publication will completely disappear in the near future because people are accessible to every information resources on the internet for free. This essay will agree that it is going to be a matter of time that printed newspapers and books will shift to the ones digitally published. On the other hand, it will disagree with the idea that the history of newspapers will be ended because people don’t want to pay for useful information anymore. Firstly, in reality the number of subscription for paper based newspapers and books has already dropped significantly in the past decades. One of the reasons must be an improvement in accessibility for internet and digital devices. Nowadays, internet and digital devices such as smart phone, laptop, tablet are very common for most of generations. Even there is a trend that school provides digital devices instead of paper based textbooks. In that sense, since younger generation will be much more familiar with the digital information rather than printed publications, it would make sense to think people will not read printed newspapers and books at all in the future. The second point is wether the decline is because they can get access every information on internet for free or not. It might be wrong because the online subscriptions or purchase for digitally published news or books are growing. The reason might be the limitation of seeking information only on search engine. Although internet has a wide variety of information and the amount of data is vast, it is often difficult to pick up the reliable information that you really need. In that sense, people still want the function that newspapers used to provide in the different way even though it costs. In conclusion, the traditional newspapers printed in the papers will decline and it could be completely replaced with digital information sources. However, it doesn’t mean that people are get used to free information and they will not purchase them anymore.
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many
aspects since Internet
was invented
.
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News papers
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books
are not the exception. In the past,
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people
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used
to
largely
relay on the paper based
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publications
as main
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information
sources,
also
these
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publications
are
mostly
subscribed or paid by
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people
.
However
,
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some
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people
say that these traditional
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publication
will completely disappear in the near future
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because
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people
are accessible to every
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information
resources on the internet for free. This essay will
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agree
that it is going to be a matter of time that
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printed
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newspapers
and
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books
will shift to the ones
digitally
published.
On the other hand
, it will disagree with the
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idea
that the history of
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newspapers
will
be ended
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because
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people
don’t want to pay for useful
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information
anymore.

Firstly
, in reality the number of subscription for paper based
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newspapers
and
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books
has already dropped
significantly
in the past decades. One of the reasons
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must
be an improvement in accessibility for internet and digital devices. Nowadays, internet and digital devices such as smart phone, laptop, tablet are
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very
common for
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most of generations
. Even there is a trend that school provides digital devices
instead
of paper based textbooks. In that sense, since younger generation will be much more familiar with the digital
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information
rather
than
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printed
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publications
, it would
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make
sense to
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think
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people
will not read
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printed
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newspapers
and
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books
at all in the future.

The second point is
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wether
the decline is
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because
they can
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get
access every
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information
on internet for free or not. It might be
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wrong
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because
the online subscriptions or
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purchase
for
digitally
published news or
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books
are growing. The reason might be the limitation of seeking
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information
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only
on search engine. Although internet has a wide variety of
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information
and the amount of data is vast, it is
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often
difficult to pick up the reliable
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information
that you
really
need. In that sense,
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people
still
want the function that
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newspapers
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used
to provide in the
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different
way
even though
it costs.

In conclusion
, the traditional
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newspapers
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printed
in the papers will decline and it could be completely replaced with digital
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information
sources.
However
, it doesn’t mean that
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people
are
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get
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used
to free
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information and
they will not
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purchase
them anymore.
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IELTS essay Nobody will buy printed newspapers or books in the future

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
380 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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