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W6: In the future, technology will be the most important part of our education.

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Technology is a powerful agent of change that allowed us to expand our capacities beyond what any other species ever did. Some innovative technologies had a lasting impact on many different aspects of human life and education is no exception. In my opinion, technology in the future will be the most important part of our education. First and foremost, Teachers have long looked towards technology to elevate learning experiences in the classroom. The importance and need for practical experience and reality-based learning have opened the doors to different approaches, among them being virtual lab simulations and virtual field trips, which hold a place in our 21st-century classrooms and can create an interactive, stimulating, and enriching learning experience for students. Furthermore, it has improved the ease of research through providing access to online libraries, which break borders of nation and language, and in order to avoid information overload, uses the artificial intelligence technology to adapt results to users based on their behavior.
Technology
is a powerful agent of
change
that
allowed
us to expand our capacities beyond what any other species ever did.
Some
innovative
technologies
had a lasting impact on
many
different
aspects of human life and education is no exception. In my opinion,
technology
in the future will be the most
important
part of our education.

First
and foremost, Teachers have long looked towards
technology
to elevate learning experiences in the classroom. The importance and need for practical experience and reality-based learning
have
opened the doors to
different
approaches, among them
being virtual
lab simulations and virtual field trips, which hold a place in our 21st-century classrooms and can create an interactive, stimulating, and enriching learning experience for students.

Furthermore
, it has
improved
the
ease
of research through providing access to online libraries, which break borders of nation and language, and in order to avoid information overload,
uses
the artificial intelligence
technology
to adapt results to users based on their behavior.
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IELTS essay W6: In the future, technology will be the most important part of our education.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
161 words
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