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No field of study can advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study.

No field of study can advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study. 6xalB
In today's complicated and rapidly ever-changing community, cooperation between various fields of study has become more and more indispensable. Some individuals insists that the correlation among subjects is so wide that no field can develop and acquire success unless bringing in other field of study. Whereas, others argue, any field is independent, and so every field will develop well without other fields. In my viewpoint, the connection between each field is close, and through communication and coordination in most fields of study can give a good result and bring the new strategies and concepts into some old disciplines and also caused the appearance of some new mixed subjects, like telecommunication, geophysics, into this world To begin with, each field has the connection to every other range of study. From the past days, people have separated our fountain of intelligence to a range of branches in order to make it simple to penetrate and acquire. For a straightforward example, Maths, provide people the ability to figured out the base knowledge of Chemistry or Physics. Even the interrelationship of two broad domains like ‘art’ and ‘science’, vith science and art are human attempts to understand and describe the world around us. The subjects, methods and the intended audiences have different traditions above all, the motivations and goals are fundamentally the same. Therefore, no range of study is separative but a unity and contains a tight relationship to the others. Likewise, no one's understanding is totally excellent. each field of study has some defects that require others to eke out a stunning artwork being shown in an exceedingly mediocre exhibition is simply a worthless work. In addition, in the field of science, combining the experience and knowledge of other field is essential to yield a great achievement. To illustrate, the Wright Brother is the forerunner of inventing current model of airplanes. By focusing on the roll of pilots, propellers, wings and engine, they could be able to create the form of airplane, which allow people to travel all around the world more efficiently and conveniently. However, if they did not look at the history and examine the past failure of old airplane models, they were not able to think the importance of propellers, engines and wings, and people are not able to enjoy the mode of cutting-edge technology. Therefore, it is acceptable that a field can advance if it incorporates knowledge from outside the field In a nutshell every science field requires others to be able to deal with complicated problems in that field.
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is independent, and
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will develop well without
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fields
. In my viewpoint, the
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connection between
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is close, and through communication and coordination in most
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fields
of
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can give a
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good
result and bring the new strategies and concepts into
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disciplines and
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caused the appearance of
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new mixed subjects, like telecommunication, geophysics, into this
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world


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with, each
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has the connection to every
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range of
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study
. From the past days,
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people
have separated our fountain of intelligence to a range of branches in order to
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make
it simple to penetrate and acquire. For a straightforward example,
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the ability to figured out the base knowledge of Chemistry or Physics. Even the interrelationship of two broad domains like ‘art’ and
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and art are human attempts to understand and
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the world around us. The subjects, methods and the intended audiences have
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different
traditions
above all
, the motivations and goals are
fundamentally
the same.
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is separative
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a unity and contains a tight relationship to the others.

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each
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of
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has
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defects that require others to eke out a stunning artwork
being shown
in an
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mediocre exhibition is
simply
a worthless work.
In addition
, in the
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of
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, combining the experience and knowledge of
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other
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field
is essential to yield a great achievement. To illustrate, the Wright Brother is the forerunner of inventing
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current
model of airplanes. By focusing on the roll of pilots, propellers, wings and engine, they could be
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able
to create the form of airplane, which
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allow
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to travel all around the world more
efficiently
and
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.
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, if they did not look at the history and examine the past failure of
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airplane models, they were not
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to
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think
the importance of propellers, engines and wings, and
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people
are not
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able
to enjoy the mode of cutting-edge technology.
Therefore
, it is acceptable that a
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field
can advance if it incorporates knowledge from outside the field

In a nutshell every
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science
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field
requires others to be
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able
to deal with complicated problems in that
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field
.
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IELTS essay No field of study can advance significantly unless outsiders bring their knowledge and experience to that field of study.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
421 words
5.5
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