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nguage. Therefor some time they have to deal with people and setuation. That said, this essay will discuse my stance on p

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It is undeniable fact that people are living foreign countries is to comman nowadays. After leaving own native countrie, it is take long time to gets confirtable in foreign language. Therefor some time they have to deal with people and setuation. That said, this essay will discuse my stance on proving that I am agree to given topic. Firstly, that creats so much complication to communication. However, people who already habitual to speaking there own mother toung they might be not used to speak othere lauguage fluatly, as result they feel ackward when they going face people therefor it majurly inpacte their sociallife. One example tow years ago my friend move to Canada and he still have not find a good friend who speeks other than hindi language, he still around with hindi speaker people. Secondly, they might be expriance racism. There are some people who were qulifed but can not get apropiate job due to they speak diffent asents some people aviod to working with tham and thay have fix nagative image for some lauguage and people always judging them and there are enough examples. For instance, a reseach conducted by Times magazine about racism in Englend and they found out that there are 40% people demolused form their job just because they speck diffent language. The seemingly inexorable debet above on people who living with forgine language can keep on going. Nevertheless, showing a deep reverance for all the aspects and observaing the finer nuance mentioned above, I espouse the notion of supporting it may expriance so hard when people are jugded becouse of the languge.
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people
are living foreign countries is to
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comman
nowadays. After leaving
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own
native
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countrie
, it is take long time to
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gets
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confirtable
in foreign language. Therefor
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some
time they
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have to
deal with
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people
and
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setuation
. That said, this essay will
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discuse
my stance on proving that I am
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agree
to
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given
topic.

Firstly
, that
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creats
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so
much complication to communication.
However
,
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people
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who
already habitual to speaking there
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own
mother
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toung
they might be not
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used
to speak
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othere
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lauguage
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fluatly
, as result they feel
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ackward
when
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they going
face
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people
therefor it
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majurly
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inpacte
their
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sociallife
. One example tow years ago my friend
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move
to
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Canada and
he
still
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have
not
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find
a
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good
friend
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who
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speeks
other than
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hindi
language, he
still
around with
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hindi
speaker
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people
.

Secondly
, they might be
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expriance
racism. There are
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some
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people
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who
were
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qulifed
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but
can not
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get
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apropiate
job due to they speak
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diffent
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asents
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aviod
to working with
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and
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have
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fix
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nagative
image for
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some
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lauguage
and
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people
always judging them and there are
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enough
examples.
For instance
, a
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reseach
conducted by Times magazine about racism in
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Englend and
they found out that there are 40%
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people
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demolused
form their job
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just
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because
they speck
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diffent
language.

The
seemingly
inexorable
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debet
above on
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people
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who
living with
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forgine
language can
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keep
on going.
Nevertheless
, showing a deep
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reverance
for all the aspects and
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observaing
the finer nuance mentioned above, I espouse the notion of supporting it may
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expriance
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so
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hard
when
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people
are
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jugded
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becouse
of the
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languge
.
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IELTS essay nguage. Therefor some time they have to deal with people and setuation. That said, this essay will discuse my stance on p

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
268 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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