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Puplic transportation should be provided for free or not. Discuss both sides.

Puplic transportation should be provided for free or not. 5AYKp
Financial status has always been considered to be the most essential factor for centuries since the humanity felt his awareness. In the last few decades, public transports have become a matter of heated debate among population. The argument that public transports should be supplied for free is a matter that can be both supported or refuted by many people. Both sides of this argument will be analysed before a reasonable conclusion is decided upon. To begin with, on the one hand many people claim that government should provide with free transportation for their citizens according to lightening their usually life. This point is aptly illustrated by the example that many students or workers who usually use public transports every day spend their much money for ticket of transports. It is known that they lack money for their needs like eating healthy food or their study and it causes some difficulties with passengers. Thus, it is clear that providing people with free transportation has many benificial sides. In contrast, some people claim that this action lead financial loss for government. This can be taken as an instance that tax taken by public transports is crucial means for state. It is justified that state spend this means for state's essential aims like free educational system, healthcare and so on. Therefore, the merits of this opinion can clearly be seen. To sum up, both sides of the argument regarding use free public transportation have strong support. However, it can be implied that the idea of supplying citizens free public transportations has strong support. It is hoped that governmental authorities will soon provided people with transports for free.
Financial status has always
been considered
to be the most essential factor for centuries since the humanity felt his awareness. In the last few decades,
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public
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transports
have become a matter of heated debate among population. The argument that
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public
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transports
should
be supplied
for
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free
is a matter that can be both supported or refuted by
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many
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people
. Both sides of this argument will be
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analysed
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before
a reasonable conclusion
is decided
upon. To
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begin
with, on the one hand
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many
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people
claim that
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government
should provide with
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free
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transportation
for their citizens according to lightening their
usually
life. This point is
aptly
illustrated by the example that
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many
students or workers who
usually
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use
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public
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transports
every day spend their much money for ticket of
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transports
. It
is known
that they lack money for their needs like eating healthy food or their study and it causes
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some
difficulties with passengers.
Thus
, it is
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clear
that providing
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people
with
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free
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transportation
has
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many
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benificial
sides.
In contrast
,
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some
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people
claim that this action lead financial loss for
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government
. This can
be taken
as an instance that tax taken by
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public
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transports
is crucial means for state. It
is justified
that state spend this means for state's essential aims like
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free
educational system, healthcare and
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so
on.
Therefore
, the merits of this opinion can
clearly
be
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seen
. To sum up, both sides of the argument regarding
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use
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free
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public
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transportation
have strong support.
However
, it can
be implied
that the
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idea
of supplying citizens
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free
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public
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transportations
has strong support. It
is hoped
that governmental authorities will
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soon
provided
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people
with
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transports
for
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free
.
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IELTS essay Puplic transportation should be provided for free or not.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
274 words
5.5
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