Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Newspaper publish information about the private lives of celebrities. some people think that government should maintain certain control over the infromation that gets published .while, other disagree. dicuss both views and give your opinion.

Newspaper publish information about the private lives of celebrities. some people think that government should maintain certain control over the infromation that gets published. while, other disagree. dicuss both views and give your opinion. Da35m
Nowdays, journalists publish the infromation about the personal lives of leaders and actors. some individual deem that authority should impose some rules and regulations on media to stop peint articles whereas, other individual opposite opinion. i formal believe that authority should take an action on media to control publish articles about celebrities and leaders. I would like to explore both sides in the upcoming paragraphs. To begin with, why authority should take an action on media they exceed their privacy. in other words, journalist exaggrate the things about the actors and leaders, celebrities have rights but journalist publish the personal matter on newspaper. Therefore, it impacts on celebrities privacy Moreover, some newspapers are crossing their limits in order to increase sale. To explain it, they publish the personal lives because celebrities have huge fan followers and with the help of fake news journalists can earn the money. In order to control these things, authority should take and action on illegal printers beacuse they will stop to print articles. For instance, the famous tribune newspaper publish the article about ranveer singh who is the famous Star. they publish the fake personal matter, Marriage news Hence, it detrimental effect o their carrier. On the other hand, publishing news about celebrities and leaders is good for their fans. To elaborate, toady youth follow the cricketers, leaders and superstars beacuse they are role models, through the article they come to know about the struggle stories, success journey, healthy lifestyle and charity organizations could be inspirational to manu. For an instance, pulse polio drive is endorsed by famous bollywood actor Amitabh Bachchan and luckily India has no more polio suffers To conclude, if authority should take an action on newspaper which are printing celebrities personal matters and fake news Hence, the media don't publish article again whereas, privacy is one of the Fundamental rights so newspaper should not used used the articles for entertainment and profitable purposes.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Nowdays
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
journalists
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
publish
the
Possible spelling mistake found.
infromation
about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
personal
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
leaders
and actors.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
some
Did you mean "individuals"?
individual
deem that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
authority
should impose
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
and regulations on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
media
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
Possible spelling mistake found.
peint
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
articles
whereas, other individual opposite opinion.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
i
formal believe that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
authority
should take an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
action
on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
media
to control
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
publish
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
articles
about
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
celebrities
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
leaders
. I would like to explore both sides in the upcoming paragraphs.

To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with, why
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
authority
should take an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
action
on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
media
they exceed their privacy.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
in
other words,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
journalist
Possible spelling mistake found.
exaggrate
the things about the actors and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
leaders
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
celebrities
have rights
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
journalist
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
publish
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
personal
matter on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspaper
.
Therefore
, it impacts on
Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "celebrities'" or "celebrity's"?
celebrities
privacy
Moreover
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspapers
are crossing their limits in order to increase sale. To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
it, they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
publish
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
personal
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
celebrities
have huge fan followers and with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
of fake
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
journalists
can earn the money. In order to control these things,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
authority
should take and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
action
on illegal printers
Possible spelling mistake found.
beacuse
they will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
to print
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
articles
.
For instance
, the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
tribune
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspaper
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
publish
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
article
about
Possible spelling mistake found.
ranveer
Possible spelling mistake found.
singh
who is the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
Star.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
publish
the fake
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
personal
matter, Marriage
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
Hence
,
It seems that a verb is missing after "it". Please verify.
it
detrimental effect o their carrier.

On the other hand
, publishing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
about
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
celebrities
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
leaders
is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
for their fans. To elaborate, toady youth follow the cricketers,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
leaders
and superstars
Possible spelling mistake found.
beacuse
they are role models, through the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
article
they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to know about the struggle stories, success journey, healthy lifestyle and charity organizations could be inspirational to
Possible spelling mistake found.
manu
. For an instance, pulse polio drive
is endorsed
by
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
Possible spelling mistake found.
bollywood
actor
Possible spelling mistake found.
Amitabh
Possible spelling mistake found.
Bachchan
and luckily India has no more polio
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
suffers


To conclude
, if
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
authority
should take an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
action
on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspaper
which are printing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
celebrities
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
personal
matters and fake
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
Hence
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
media
don't
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
publish
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
article
again whereas, privacy is one of the Fundamental rights
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspaper
should not
The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: "use"
used
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
articles
for entertainment and profitable purposes.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Newspaper publish information about the private lives of celebrities. some people think that government should maintain certain control over the infromation that gets published. while, other disagree. dicuss both views and give your opinion.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
322 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • Newspaper publish information about the private lives of celebrities. some people think that government should maintain certain control over the infromation that gets published .while, other disagree. dicuss both views and give your opinion.