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News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this? v. 7
Weather the pictures show the new stories more effectively or not is still widely debated nowadays. I personally agree that pictures can deliver the new stories on TV and in newspapers more effectively compared to words. Firstly, pictures can often catch the attention from the audiences/ readers. The pictures that shown from TV or newspapers are usually colorful and at a significant place. Based on a research, the reports that accompanied with pictures always read/ watched by more people. Newspapers without any pictures are hard to catch the attention from their subscribers. For example, you might notice a fascinating picture on TV, then you might follow and watch the whole story. Furthermore, stories with pictures can explain the ideas more clearly, and save time for the audience. A number of people nowadays like to skim the whole article, and only pick the main points to read. Pictures can deliver the whole ideas much faster than words. For instance, a report that trying to inform the local community that a bridge has recently been built. A picture of the new bridge with outstanding titles can fully deliver the message in seconds. Ultimately, reports with pictures can attract more youngsters to read or watch the reports. Youngsters usually pay more attention to colorful image other than a report full of words. Despite the fact that the books for youngsters always have cartoons or pictures inside accompanied with words. I do understand the opposing view, which is that pictures in reports can potentially distract audience’s attention from the content. Nevertheless, I feel that a good amount of distraction can help the readers focus more or become more curious about the stories. Overall, I believe that pictures are more effectively than words as it can improve the overall reading rate, deliver the stories faster and can accepted by youngsters.
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stories
on TV and in newspapers more
effectively
compared to words.

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,
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pictures
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often
catch the
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attention
from the audiences/ readers. The
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pictures
that shown from TV or newspapers are
usually
colorful and at a significant place. Based on a research, the
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reports
that
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accompanied with
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pictures
always read/
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watched
by more
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people
. Newspapers without any
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pictures
are
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hard
to catch the
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attention
from their subscribers.
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, you might notice a fascinating
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picture
on TV, then you might follow and
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watch
the whole
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story
.
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stories
with
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can
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explain
the
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ideas
more
clearly
, and save time for the audience. A number of
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people
nowadays like to skim the whole article, and
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only
pick the main points to read.
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can
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deliver
the whole
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ideas
much faster than words.
For instance
, a
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report
that trying to inform the local community that a bridge has recently
been built
. A
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picture
of the new bridge with outstanding titles can
fully
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deliver
the message in seconds.
Ultimately
,
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reports
with
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pictures
can attract more youngsters to read or
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watch
the
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reports
. Youngsters
usually
pay more
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attention
to colorful image other than a
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report
full of words. Despite the fact that the books for youngsters always have cartoons or
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pictures
inside
The usual collocation for "accompany" is "by," not "with." It is better to say this: "accompanied by".
accompanied with
words.

I do understand the opposing view, which is that
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pictures
in
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reports
can
potentially
distract audience’s
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attention
from the content.
Nevertheless
, I feel that a
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good
amount of distraction can
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help
the readers focus more or become more curious about the stories.

Overall
, I believe that
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pictures
are more
effectively
than words as it can
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improve
the
overall
reading rate,
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deliver
the
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stories
faster and can
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accepted
by youngsters.
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IELTS essay News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
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