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News media is important in our society. Why it is so important. Do you think its influence is generally positive or negative.

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plays an essential role in everyone's life.
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positive
reasons to shore light upon the
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proclivity. To plunge into, the most intrinsic one is the information and knowledge. To justify, news
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media
provide ins and outs of the universe such as
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current
affairs,
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events
and
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more. It gives
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enough
knowledge about various types of culture and lifestyle. News
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media
conducted surveys such as vote cast,
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positive
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IELTS essay News media is important in our society. Why it is so important. Do you think its influence is generally positive or negative.

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