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Do you want to know an easy way to improve your student life reading in English? The new website of the magazine for students of English is full of blogs, useful links, suggestions and much more. From the first time I started reading it, I found articles about my tennis passion. It opens me new perspectives! First of all, the clear feature, which I like most, is the structure of the website. The creators divided it into easy to find and interesting sections. One of these is the students' blogs. It includes articles written by psychologists and mentioned scientific proofs, in light of this the notions seem reliable. In spite of this section, the “help with exam preparation”, in my view, can't be useful because it only includes videos about study methods for university. The best way to improve it is adding videos about oher study methods for all kinds of students and personally much more blogs for the section. On balance, for students of all ages I absolutely recommend the website. On other hand, if you are a worker I definitely would not suggest it.
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IELTS essay New website of the magazine for students of English

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
186 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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