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New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. with this opinion? YrJj
Shopping has become a crucial part of our human life. From buying as small as a box of pencil to as big as purchasing a house by booking online, everything has been made convenient to the consumers. customer has choice to choose from a variety of products so, I firmly agree with this opinion To begin with, in the past century shopping was considered to be a luxurious habit because not everyone was able to afford shopping. As we moved along in time internet brought shops and sellers a more easy and reliable way to sell their product even to other cities now that consumers have choice to purchase a product which is not available in the consumer's city, purchasing it online has made it possible. It has also benefited many small businesses who were struggling in past to have a reach of customers for their product since nobody knew that they were selling products from home or small cottage. Now with help of shopping, customers can have their hands on that as well. Moreover in many cases consumers who are disabled or sick that could not travel for groceries and other stuff needed. Purchasing from various near by vendors it has been made possible. Technology has come a long way a fashion trend from cinema industry can be reached to general public with help of online shopping. On the flipside, there are always two side of a coin since consumer is purchasing online, the looks of a product can be deceiving. Consumers do give feedbacks on websites to alert other customers about such. Some how sellers get away without providing a refund or any law suits. Purchasing an electronic is a potentially taking a risk because nowadays they sell a well furbished electronics it is hard to figure out and customers do not get what they paid for. To cite an example more than 1000 complaints are received by Amazon India within a day that they got wrong product or a faculty product some even use false advertisement by posting original image and sending a A2 quality which is pretty much a clone of original product. To conclude, shopping can be a delightful experience but it comes with its cons. I do believe it is good thing to shop online but I will recommend to do a research before making a purchase so it is better if consumer's read reviews before making a purchase.
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has become a crucial part of our human life. From buying as
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small
as a box of pencil to as
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big
as purchasing a
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house
by booking
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online
, everything has
been made
convenient to the
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consumers
.
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customer
has choice to choose from a variety of
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products
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, I
firmly
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agree
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with, in the past century
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shopping
was considered
to be a luxurious habit
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because
not everyone was able to afford
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shopping
. As we
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moved
along in time internet brought shops and sellers a more easy and reliable way to sell their
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product
even to other cities
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now
that
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consumers
have choice to
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purchase
a
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product
which is not available in the consumer's city, purchasing it
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online
has made it possible. It has
also
benefited
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many
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small
businesses who were struggling in past to have a reach of
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customers
for their
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product
since nobody knew that they were selling
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products
from home or
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small
cottage.
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with
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help
of
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shopping
,
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customers
can have their hands on that
as well
.
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Moreover
in
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cases
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consumers
who
are disabled
or sick that could not travel for groceries and other stuff needed. Purchasing from various
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near by
vendors it has
been made
possible. Technology has
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come
a long way a fashion trend from cinema industry can
be reached
to
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general public
with
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help
of
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online
shopping.

On the
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flipside
, there are always two side of a coin since
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consumer
is purchasing
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online
, the looks of a
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product
can be deceiving.
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Consumers
do give feedbacks on websites to alert other
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customers
about such.
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Some how
sellers
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get
away without providing a refund or any
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law suits
. Purchasing an electronic is a
potentially
taking a
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risk
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because
nowadays they sell a well furbished electronics it is
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hard
to figure out and
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customers
do not
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get
what they paid for. To cite an example more than 1000 complaints
are received
by Amazon India within a day that they
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got
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wrong
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product
or a faculty
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product
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some
even
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use
false advertisement by posting original image and sending a A2 quality which is pretty much a clone of original product.

To conclude
,
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shopping
can be a delightful experience
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but
it
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comes
with its cons. I do believe it is
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good
thing to shop
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online
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but
I will
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recommend to do
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a research
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before
making a
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purchase
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so
it is better if consumer's read reviews
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before
making a
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purchase
.
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IELTS essay New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. with this opinion?

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  American English
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405 words
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