Art is considered as an important part of society as well as an expression of its culture. Do you think it is important for children to be taught art? Do you think children should be encouraged to focus on art rather than other subjects?
Art is considered as an important part of society as well as an expression of its culture. Do you think it is important for children to be taught art? Do you think children should be encouraged to focus on art rather than other subjects? d8Ld
Parents are concient about what their children learn in order to develop different skills, while art is one of their choices. It has been established that art is an important part of society as weel as an expression of its culture. I believe there are distinct benefit for a child to learn art, so it is important for kids to be taught art, however, I firmly disagree that children shoulc be encouraged to only focus on art rather than other subjects.
One advantages of children learning art is that can learn how to be corsentrated. Since, children are usually very active for example they can sit there and work quitely, as they will start running around soon. However, students are forced to draw until they finish, therefore they can practise to be concentrated, which will help them perform better in school or at work in the future. Second, the culture of the society can be passed on to the next generation as children will learn from the drawing of some famous artist. Moreover, they will learn about part of the history, the culture and history will consequently be known by more citizens, especially those who are younger. Resulting in the important stories and history of the country can be well-known and also be peresved.
Nevertheless, I think that students can develop other skills but not just on art. First, everyone has their unique charteristic and personability, therefore the area that each of us good at is not common. Forcing a kid who peform excellent in sport to learn art which he will not perform well, will lead the kid being not confident and always juge himself. Second, encouraging children focus on art rather than other subjects may caused them loosing opportunities to learn distinct skills and grow abilities, as it require lots of time to practise while learning art, no matter drawing or play piano, especially those who are not talented. However, if they spend those time on developing new skills that is not popular or more sutiable for themseleves, they may be increasingly sucess at the end.
In conclusion, I believe various munber of children can benefit from learning art, in terms of concentration, while the society can also be benefit from children being taugh art but partents should choose courses that are sutiable for their childrens, since their children potential may not be found if they just blindly follow the trend and let their children learn art. 
Parents are  
concient
 about what their  
children
  learn
 in order to develop  
different
  skills
, while  
art
 is one of their choices. It has  
been established
 that  
art
 is an  
important
 part of society as  
weel
 as an expression of its culture. I believe there are distinct benefit for a child to  
learn
  art
,  
so
 it is  
important
 for kids to  
be taught
  art
,  
however
, I  
firmly
 disagree that  
children
  shoulc
  be encouraged
 to  
only
 focus on  
art
  rather
 than other subjects.
One advantages of  
children
 learning  
art
 is that can  
learn
 how to be  
corsentrated
. Since,  
children
 are  
usually
  very
 active  
for example
 they can sit there and work  
quitely
, as they will  
start
 running around  
soon
.  
However
, students  
are forced
 to draw until they finish,  
therefore
 they can  
practise
 to  
be concentrated
, which will  
help
 them perform better in school or at work in the future. Second, the culture of the society can  
be passed
 on to the  
next
 generation as  
children
 will  
learn
 from the drawing of  
some
  famous
 artist.  
Moreover
, they will  
learn
 about part of the history, the culture and history will  
consequently
  be known
 by more citizens,  
especially
 those who are younger. Resulting in the  
important
 stories and history of the country can be well-known and  
also
 be  
peresved
. 
Nevertheless
, I  
think
 that students can develop other  
skills
  but
 not  
just
 on  
art
.  
First
, everyone has their unique  
charteristic
 and  
personability
,  
therefore
 the area that each of us  
good
 at is not common. Forcing a kid who  
peform
 excellent in sport to  
learn
  art
 which he will not perform well, will lead the kid being not confident and always  
juge
 himself. Second, encouraging  
children
 focus on  
art
  rather
 than other subjects may caused them loosing opportunities to  
learn
 distinct  
skills
 and grow abilities, as it require lots of time to  
practise
 while learning  
art
, no matter drawing or play piano,  
especially
 those who are not talented.  
However
, if they spend those time on developing new  
skills
  that is
 not popular or more  
sutiable
 for  
themseleves
, they may be  
increasingly
  sucess
 at the  
end
. 
In conclusion
, I believe various  
munber
 of  
children
 can benefit from learning  
art
, in terms of concentration, while the society can  
also
 be benefit from  
children
 being  
taugh
  art
  but
  partents
 should choose courses that are  
sutiable
 for their  
childrens
, since their  
children
 potential may not  
be found
 if they  
just
  blindly
 follow the trend and  
let
 their  
children
  learn
  art
.