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New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. with this opinion? ExaM
The widespread of smartphones and online platforms are reshaping the shopper’s behaviour. This essay totally agrees with this statement due to the expanded knowledge of today’s products and store, as well as customers are being price cautious because of the quick price comparison on different platforms. Nowadays, several products and brands are being noticed just because for the technological advancement. Consumers are more aware of products and trends that they weren’t aware of their existence, in a result the lifestyle of these consumers has changed. For instance, the consumption of organic food has been in a sharp increase since 2007 till today. A research was published by Oxford University last year, shows that 87% of the organic food in happening online. In my view, such change in a way is helping consumers to maintain a healthy life. Furthermore, users now are being price aware as they have access to any product, they want to either buy it or sell it. Currently, before selling or buying any item, users can check the product’s price on different platforms and compare them to get the best price rather than paying any extra money for the same product. For example, an article on the financial times I read few weeks backs, mentions that consumers always find a 9% price difference while comparing online prices. I believe, users will be mor price careful and will continue to seek the best price as long as the technology is being advanced. In conclusion, the ongoing technological evolution is a key factor behind consumer’s transformation as the lifestyle of people is changing along with financial awareness that they have now.
The phrase 'The widespread of' is not correct. Use a noun, not an adjective, between 'The' and 'of'.
The widespread of
smartphones and online platforms are reshaping the shopper’s
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behaviour
. This essay
totally
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agrees
with this statement due to the expanded knowledge of
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today
’s
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products
and store,
as well
as customers are being
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price
cautious
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because
of the quick
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price
comparison on
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different
platforms.

Nowadays, several
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products
and brands are
being noticed
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just
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because
for the technological advancement.
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Consumers
are more aware of
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products
and trends that they weren’t aware of their existence, in a result the lifestyle of these
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consumers
has
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changed
.
For instance
, the consumption of organic food has been in a sharp increase since 2007 till
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today
.
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "research".
A research
was published
by Oxford University last year,
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shows
that 87% of the organic food in happening online. In my view, such
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change
in a way is helping
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consumers
to maintain a healthy life.

Furthermore
, users
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now
are being
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price
aware as they have access to any
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product
, they want to either
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buy
it or sell it.
Currently
,
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before
selling or buying any item, users can
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check
the
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product’s
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price
on
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different
platforms and compare them to
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get
the best
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price
rather
than paying any extra money for the same
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product
.
For example
, an article on the
If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.
financial times
I read few weeks backs, mentions that
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consumers
always find a 9%
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price
difference while comparing online
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prices
. I believe, users will be
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mor
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price
careful and will continue to seek the best
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price
as long as the technology is
being advanced
.

In conclusion
, the ongoing technological evolution is a key factor behind
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consumer’s
transformation as the lifestyle of
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people
is changing along with financial awareness that they have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
.
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IELTS essay New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. with this opinion?

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272 words
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