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negative effect of hard-working

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However, overwork can lead to regrets later in life. In general, people work hard not only for themselves but also for their loved ones. heTy want to get their kids good educations, they want to buy bigger houses for their families. However, often what their loved ones want is simply more time together, which is hard to achieve when people work more than ten hours a day. Once their kids are grown-ups and their parents passed away, they cannot get those years back anymore. All they can do is regret having put career before family.

However
, overwork can lead to regrets later in life. In general
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 work This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 for themselves This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 for their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admiredadored
loved
 ones. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterHeTy
heTy
 want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 their kids This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 educations, they want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 bigger This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 for their families. However
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 what their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admiredadored
loved
 ones want is simply
 more time together, which is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to achieve when This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 work more than ten hours a day. Once their kids are grown
-ups and their parents passed away, they cannot This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 those years back anymore. All they can do is regret having put career This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 family. 