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Necessity of modern science

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Modern sience play a vital role in the world. Without sience we can't hink in our daily life. Sometimes its bless for us and some time cruse. However, modern innovation make our life so easer form previous life. Communication facilities is one of them. Such as internet, mobile phone, Email created living enviorment better then earlier. Even though we can communcate with people without any moving. Otherhand, Industrial revolution is one of the bless for the world. Its not only developed our economy but aslo living life of people. For development of any nation need to develop industrial sector. Like our germents sector come to blessing for our country.
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IELTS essay Necessity of modern science

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
109 words
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