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near-infrared imaging (NIR)

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Recently, near-infrared imaging (NIR) is a new technology that is now widely used in biomedical fields with the advantages of non-invasive, non-ionizing, fast and cheap. Because the main component of human tissue is water, for example, in lean tissue, 75% water, 83% in blood, 25% in fat, and water has a near infrared light absorption (680nm). –1000 nm) is very low so using near-infrared in biological tissue studies would be able to produce interesting results. Some applications of imaging techniques to model the hand tendons by near-infrared techniques have been performed such as optical tomography, diagnosis of cerebral edema and also mammography. This technique is also used to determine vein imaging or to study palmar imaging. In addition, this method can also record images of the tendon system of the hand with high contrast, safety, can observe tendon movements in real time, receiving great attention in recent times.
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IELTS essay near-infrared imaging (NIR)

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