Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

ndoubtedly, human do various activities over own life span, however, the range of these actions are completely depende

ndoubtedly, human do various activities over own life span, however, the range of these actions are completely depende ldbQJ

Undoubtedly, human do various activities over own life span, however, the range of these actions are completely dependent on their age. A controversial question has currently aroused the attention of people whether old people should take risk than youngsters? In this response to the question, common wisdom believes the young people should expose to new innovation because they can catch new information and old people, in contrast, are supposed to relax and enjoy retirement but I totally have a different perspective on the issue and tend to believe old people need to explore more than young people do. I will elaborate on my reason in the following paragraph. To begin with, exploring new thing help old people to keep mental and physical health. In the bustle and hustle modern era, individuals are continuously under pressure and anxiety. Hence they are prone to get various kinds of physical diseases for example Alzheimer's and mental disorders such as depression. exploring new innovations and attempting to be successful give them vitality and increase life hope due to fact that they feel a sense of effectiveness and usefulness. For another thing. it not only stimulate their brain to think and find a solution that plays a great role to prevent Alzheimer, but it also leads to be the active and spend more energy that is very effective for physical health

Undoubtedly
, human do various activities over This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 life span, however
, the range of these actions are completely dependent on their age. A controversial question has currently
 aroused the attention of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 whether You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrayancienttiredelderlydecrepitvenerable
old
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 should take This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazarddanger
risk
 than youngsters? In this response to the question, common wisdom believes the young You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 should expose to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 innovation This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they can catch You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 information and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrayancienttiredelderlydecrepitvenerable
old
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
, in contrast
, are supposed
 to relax and enjoy retirement This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I totally
 have a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 perspective on the issue and tend to believe You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrayancienttiredelderlydecrepitvenerable
old
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 need to explore more than young You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 do. I will elaborate on my reason in the following paragraph.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, exploring You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 thing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgrayancienttiredelderlydecrepitvenerable
old
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 mental and physical health. In the bustle and hustle modern era, individuals are continuously
 under pressure and anxiety. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Hence,
Hence
 they are prone to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 various kinds of physical diseases for example
 Alzheimer's and mental disorders such as depression. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterExploring
exploring
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 innovations and attempting to be successful give them vitality and increase life hope due to fact that they feel a sense of effectiveness and usefulness. For another thing. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
 not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 stimulate their brain to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 and find a solution that plays a great role to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
 Alzheimer, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it also
 leads to be the active and spend more energy that is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 effective for physical Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphhealth.health!health?health:health,health;
health