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natural resources in our world

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The natural sources of our world are decreasing day by day. One of the most useful solutions to decrease the use of sources is recycling. Separating wastes as paper, plastic, glass etc. and recycling them, instead of putting all types of waste on rubbish, would make a huge difference on the amount of sources used. Since recycling has a key role, laws are needed to make people recycle more of their wastes. There are some reasons behind the necessity of it. Recycling is so important that it cannot depend on people’s preferences. That’s why, governments should make it a legal requirement. Since making recycling of home waste a legal requirement brings support with it, it will be easier for people to recycle their wastes. Furthermore, when governments play an active role by implementing laws about recycling, they not only promote recycling but also raise people’s awareness about the topic.
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of sources is
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. Separating
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wastes
as paper, plastic, glass etc. and
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recycling
them,
instead
of putting all types of
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on rubbish, would
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make
a huge difference on the amount of sources
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used
. Since
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has a key role, laws
are needed
to
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make
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people
recycle more of their
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wastes
. There are
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some
reasons behind the necessity of it.

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important
that it cannot depend on
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people’s
preferences. That’s why,
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governments
should
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make
it a legal requirement. Since making
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recycling
of home
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waste
a legal requirement brings support with it, it will be easier for
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people
to recycle their
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wastes
.
Furthermore
, when
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governments
play an active role by implementing laws about
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recycling
, they not
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promote
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raise
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awareness about the topic.

IELTS essay natural resources in our world

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
149 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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