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n the future, indeed, all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless . Of course there are disadvantages to this, but advantages are more than disadvantages

n the future, indeed, all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. Of course there are disadvantages to this, but advantages are more than disadvantages oxKjB
Due to the presence of these driverless cars, jobs will be reduced and drivers will be unemployed. It is not far from the truth that this will be damage to the taxi driver's funds. Nowadays, hackers are trying to break into any device. It can also be life threatening for passengers if hackers can break into the car program On the other hand, driverless cars have more advantages. For example, this smart car doesn't break the rules and doesn't move excessively other than its own program. Most of the current car accidents are caused by drivers breaking the rules. This will be avoided in future cars. There will be no traffic jams and no work for Road patrol officers. My conclusion is, it is clear from the content of the essay that despite the disadvantages, we have enough our needs to run this machine
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cars
, jobs will be
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reduced
and drivers will
be unemployed
. It is not far from the truth that this will be damage to the taxi driver's funds. Nowadays, hackers are trying to break into any device. It can
also
be life threatening for passengers if hackers can break into the
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car
program

On the other hand
, driverless
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cars
have more advantages.
For example
, this smart
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car
doesn't break the
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rules
and doesn't
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move
excessively
other than its
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own
program. Most of the
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current
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car
accidents
are caused
by drivers breaking the
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rules
. This will
be avoided
in future
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cars
. There will be no traffic jams and no work for Road patrol officers.

My conclusion is, it is
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clear
from the content of the essay that despite the disadvantages, we have
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IELTS essay n the future, indeed, all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. Of course there are disadvantages to this, but advantages are more than disadvantages

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