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n the current context, a plethora of people

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In the current context, a plethora of people really busy with jobs and studies, and they do not have enough time for house-hold activities. Therefore, we are simply sending the garbarge to town-council collectors in order to tranfer to collecting points. Nowadays, this has become the one of biggest problem for government. Therefore, It is viable to go for critical review of the on-going issue, and we need to find the alternatives. The biggest reason for this on-going problem is to not properly performing the waste management. There should be better way to recycle the waste, and in order to do that, we need exact collection points and separate boxes for different items such as plastics, glass and metals. This is illustrated by the waste management system in developed counties, such as England and Europ. Not only the government, but also human's attitudes also should be changed to generate clean country as society should equally support for waste management proceedure. There are various strategies have been implemented in order to planning the re-cycle process, and this will be supporting to resolve this issue. Taxes and rules should be enforced in order to control the amount of rubbish, and this should be taken care by government bodies such as environment authorities. For instance, if we can introduce the billing system for rabbish, this can be re-invested for the wste management project as it has numbers of merits to community. To illustrate this, Singapore has significantly inhanced the waste management as it has introduced new policies towards to the waste management. As far as I am concerned above, Firstly, we need to exactly understand, and identify the issue. In anather word, we need to search root cause of the problem, and find the solutions as well as strategies in order to resolve this on going rubbish collection problem. As per my recommendation, society and government should equally contribute in order to build up proper waste management system, and this will help to generate the eco friednly country.
In the
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current
context, a plethora of
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people
really
busy with jobs and studies, and they do not have
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enough
time for
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house
-hold activities.
Therefore
, we are
simply
sending the
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garbarge
to town-council collectors in
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order
to
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tranfer
to collecting points. Nowadays, this has become the one of
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biggest
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problem
for
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government
.
Therefore
, It is viable to go for critical review of the
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on-going
issue, and we
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need
to find the alternatives.

The biggest reason for this
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on-going
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problem
is to not
properly
performing the
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waste
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management
. There should be
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better
way to recycle the
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waste
, and in
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order
to do that, we
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need
exact collection points and separate boxes for
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different
items such as plastics, glass and metals. This
is illustrated
by the
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waste
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management
system in developed counties, such as England and
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Europ
. Not
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only
the
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government
,
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but
also
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human's attitudes
also
should be
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changed
to generate clean country as society should
equally
support for
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waste
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management
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proceedure
.

There are various strategies have
been implemented
in
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order
to
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planning
the re-cycle process, and this will be supporting to resolve this issue. Taxes and
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rules
should
be enforced
in
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order
to control the amount of rubbish, and this should
be taken
care by
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government
bodies such as environment authorities.
For instance
, if we can introduce the billing system for
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rabbish
, this can be re-invested for the
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wste
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management
project as it has numbers of merits to community. To illustrate this, Singapore has
significantly
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inhanced
the
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waste
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
management
as it has introduced new policies towards to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
management.

As far as I
am concerned
above,
Firstly
, we
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need
to exactly understand, and identify the issue. In
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anather
word, we
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
to search root cause of the
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problem
, and find the solutions
as well
as strategies in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
order
to resolve this
Did you mean "ongoing"?
on going
rubbish collection
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problem
. As per my recommendation, society and
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government
should
equally
contribute in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
order
to build up proper
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
management
system, and this will
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help
to generate the
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eco
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friednly
country.
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IELTS essay n the current context, a plethora of people

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
335 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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