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My name is Saidakbar i'm 17 years old and I am from Uzbekistan. I have been learning English for 8 months and it was fancy, i have a lot of goals and i will achieve my goals

My name is Saidakbar i'm 17 years old and I am from Uzbekistan. I have been learning English for 8 months and it was fancy, i have a lot of goals and i will achieve my goals kgGYe
My name is Saidakbar i'm 17 years old and I am from Uzbekistan. I have been learning English for 8 months and it was fancy, i have a lot of goals and i will achieve my goals. I come from small family, i have father, mather and brather, i have some habits fot exampl learning English, training, reading books and something, my bigger goal is enter to university. It is my bigger goal. My English teacher's name is Zarina and i am very pleased with my teacher
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learning English, training, reading books and something, my bigger
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to university. It is my bigger
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. My English teacher's name is
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IELTS essay My name is Saidakbar i'm 17 years old and I am from Uzbekistan. I have been learning English for 8 months and it was fancy, i have a lot of goals and i will achieve my goals

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
86 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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