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My name is Saidakbar i'm 17 years old and I am from Uzbekistan. I have been learning English for 8 months and it was fancy, i have a lot of goals and i will achieve my goals

My name is Saidakbar i'm 17 years old and I am from Uzbekistan. I have been learning English for 8 months and it was fancy, i have a lot of goals and i will achieve my goals kgGYe
My name is Saidakbar i'm 17 years old and I am from Uzbekistan. I have been learning English for 8 months and it was fancy, i have a lot of goals and i will achieve my goals. I come from small family, i have father, mather and brather, i have some habits fot exampl learning English, training, reading books and something, my bigger goal is enter to university. It is my bigger goal. My English teacher's name is Zarina and i am very pleased with my teacher
My name is
Saidakbar
i'm
17 years
old and
I am from Uzbekistan. I have been learning English for 8 months and it was fancy,
i
have
a lot of
goals
and
i
will achieve my
goals
. I
come
from
small
family,
i
have
father
,
mather
and
brather
,
i
have
some
habits
fot
exampl
learning English, training, reading books and something, my bigger
goal
is
enter
to university. It is my bigger
goal
. My English teacher's name is
Zarina
and
i
am
very
pleased
with my
teacher
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IELTS essay My name is Saidakbar i'm 17 years old and I am from Uzbekistan. I have been learning English for 8 months and it was fancy, i have a lot of goals and i will achieve my goals

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  American English
1 paragraphs
86 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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