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If product is good and meets cutomers needs than people will buy it to what extent do you agree or disagree

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Advertisment is a vital and neccessary for company to link between buyer and seller l. If the company product has an excellent productivity, it encourage masses to buy it and advertisment will not much usefull, hence, I partially Agree with the late statement and my reason for my inclination will be articulated in the trail paragraph. To embark with, there is a first and foremost strong reason for not doing advertisment is, it will increase the cost of product, as customer is aware about the productivity and almost satisfied with it then due to advertisment company will rise the products costing. For instance, one of famous company Hinduatan Uniliver's product collgate is higher selling product in India and they done unneccessary pramotion of product and after that initially they rise the cost of product. Further more, the second most reason is miss guide the people for the products because form of advertisement company miss lead humans by attracting display of common feature. Additionally masses also over buying the product without any importance. A survey which is done by Times of India and it reflects that 68% of population has done over buying due to attractive pramotion doen by popular celebrity. However, there is also strong reason for doing advertisment is it help the other large amount of population to aware about their quality of product for example, some international company have large amount of customer due to advertisment, still they much and they also reach through the village. On a clase scrutiny, I conclude that, advertisment is depend on company. It assential the if, it not disturbs cost and not miss lead the people and help to reach every corner of the world.
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is a vital and
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neccessary
for
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company
to link between buyer and seller l. If the
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company
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product
has an excellent productivity, it
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encourage
masses to
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buy
it and
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advertisment
will not much
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usefull
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partially
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reason
for my inclination will
be articulated
in the trail paragraph.

To embark with, there is a
first
and foremost strong
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reason
for not doing
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advertisment
is, it will increase the cost of
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product
, as customer is aware about the productivity and almost satisfied with it then due to
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advertisment
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company
will rise the
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products
costing.
For instance
, one of
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famous
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company
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Hinduatan
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Uniliver
's
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product
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collgate
is higher selling
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product
in
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India and
they done
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unneccessary
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pramotion
of
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product
and after that
initially
they rise the cost of product.

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more, the second most
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reason
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people
for the
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products
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because
form of advertisement
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company
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miss lead
humans by attracting display of common feature.
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Additionally
masses
also
over buying the
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product
without any importance. A survey which
is done
by Times of India and it reflects that 68% of population has done over buying due to attractive
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pramotion
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doen
by popular celebrity.

However
, there is
also
strong
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reason
for doing
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advertisment
is it
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help
the other large amount of population to aware about their quality of
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product
for example
,
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some
international
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company
have large amount of customer due to
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advertisment
,
still
they
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much and
they
also
reach through the village.

On a
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clase
scrutiny, I conclude that,
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advertisment
is
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company
. It
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miss lead
the
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people
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help
to reach every corner of the world.
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IELTS essay If product is good and meets cutomers needs than people will buy it

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283 words
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