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My name is Danielle Stewart and I have just moved to the apartment opposite to yours.

My name is Danielle Stewart and I have just moved to the apartment opposite to yours. My husband and I are throwing a house warming party on 25th January and we would be pleased if you and your family join us for the evening. Celebration starts at 6: 00 pm with welcome snacks and drinks, followed by a few. Later, one of my friends who plays the guitar very well has promised to add more charm to the event with his performance. Afterwards, everybody will have dinner together which will put a great ending to the event. It would be very nice, if you join us for the event as this will give us the opportunity to know each other. Since there will be about 15 people at the party, there are chances that you might be disturbed by the noise from my apartment. We would like to apologise for any kind of inconvenience in advance and we promise to keep the noise levels as low as possible. I hope you accept my invitation and join us for the party.

My name is Danielle Stewart and I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to the apartment opposite to yours. My husband and I are throwing a This expression is normally spelled as one or with a hyphen.house-warminghousewarming
house warming
 party on 25th Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).January, and
January and
 we would be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfied
pleased
 if you and your family This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 us for the evening.

Celebration This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 at 6: 00 pm with welcome snacks and drinks, followed by a few. Later, one of my friends who Did you mean “play”? Alternatively, check whether the singular of ‘friends’ should be used.play
plays
 the guitar This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 well has promised to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 more charm to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 with his performance. Afterwards, everybody will have dinner together which will put a great ending to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
. It would be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 nice, if you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 us for the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 as this will give us the opportunity to know each other. Since there will be about 15 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 at the party, there are chances that you might be disturbed
 by the noise from my apartment. We would like to Possible spelling mistake. ‘apologise’ is British English.apologize
apologise
 for any kind of inconvenience in Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).advance, and
advance and
 we promise to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 the noise levels as low as possible.

I hope you accept my invitation and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 us for the party. 