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My name is Danielle Stewart and I have just moved to the apartment opposite to yours.

My name is Danielle Stewart and I have just moved to the apartment opposite to yours. My husband and I are throwing a house warming party on 25th January and we would be pleased if you and your family join us for the evening. Celebration starts at 6: 00 pm with welcome snacks and drinks, followed by a few. Later, one of my friends who plays the guitar very well has promised to add more charm to the event with his performance. Afterwards, everybody will have dinner together which will put a great ending to the event. It would be very nice, if you join us for the event as this will give us the opportunity to know each other. Since there will be about 15 people at the party, there are chances that you might be disturbed by the noise from my apartment. We would like to apologise for any kind of inconvenience in advance and we promise to keep the noise levels as low as possible. I hope you accept my invitation and join us for the party.
My name is Danielle Stewart and I have
just
moved
to the apartment opposite to yours. My husband and I are throwing a
house warming
party on 25th
January and
we would be
pleased
if you and your family
join
us for the evening.

Celebration
starts
at 6: 00 pm with welcome snacks and drinks, followed by a few. Later, one of my friends who
plays
the guitar
very
well has promised to
add
more charm to the
event
with his performance. Afterwards, everybody will have dinner together which will put a great ending to the
event
. It would be
very
nice, if you
join
us for the
event
as this will give us the opportunity to know each other. Since there will be about 15
people
at the party, there are chances that you might
be disturbed
by the noise from my apartment. We would like to
apologise
for any kind of inconvenience in
advance and
we promise to
keep
the noise levels as low as possible.

I hope you accept my invitation and
join
us for the party.
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IELTS essay My name is Danielle Stewart and I have just moved to the apartment opposite to yours.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
180 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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