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Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience. Do you think this is a good idea or a waste of time?

Do part-time is a good beginning of the earning. It should learn to all students in their life because they can get a different experience. The large, number of educators like to make an experience before starting the continues study. However, they can do lots of thing job, go to abroad so on. After the completed schooly, people want to go for mind fresh. Elsewhere place they can do. It is nothing 'bad' idea, but ahead of the study without know-how can do those. Example be A fresh student who has finished high school but without known, what is my next study of subjects. However, lots of time waist, on the other hand, rising the gap between the ahead education. Today many people living in urban areas, due to increasing the rate of domestics products. Therefore this trip will get dear rather than college fees, as well as money, will be spent both sides one in is travelling and the second is in admission. Moreover, some benefits, such as a child will have the world or part-time of knowledge. But this is not a hundred per cent wrong. This expansive thing only can afford a rich child. 'Another' side who are wanting to whether own fees to earn by itself. An example, Student is known that his father income is not wealth. That's why that will start short work on free days, Rather go to fun with friends and long' tours. To conclude, Some students seem to like whether to do fun after the study presume, the second in, who is getting ready for new challenges in Higher Education. Therefore both have their own decision.
Do part-time is a
good
beginning of the earning. It should learn to all
students
in their life
because
they can
get
a
different
experience. The large, number of educators like to
make
an experience
before
starting the continues
study
.
However
, they can do
lots of thing
job,
go to abroad
so
on.

After the completed
schooly
,
people
want to go for mind fresh.
Elsewhere
place they can do. It is nothing '
bad
'
idea
,
but
ahead of the
study
without know-how can do those. Example
be
A fresh
student
who has finished high school
but
without known, what is my
next
study
of subjects.
However
, lots of time waist,
on the other hand
, rising the gap between the ahead education.
Today
many
people
living in urban areas, due to increasing the rate of domestics products.
Therefore
this trip will
get
dear
rather
than college fees,
as well
as money, will
be spent
both sides one in is travelling and the second is in admission.

Moreover
,
some
benefits, such as a child will have the world or part-time of knowledge.
But
this is not a hundred per cent
wrong
. This expansive thing
only
can afford a rich child. 'Another' side who are wanting to whether
own
fees to earn by itself. An example,
Student
is known
that his father income is not wealth. That's why that will
start
short work on free days,
Rather
go to fun with friends and long' tours.

To conclude
,
Some
students
seem to like whether to do fun after the
study
presume, the second in, who is getting ready for new challenges in Higher Education.
Therefore
both have their
own
decision.
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IELTS essay Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience. Do you think this is a good idea or a waste of time?

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