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My name are ra’ed. i’m gay (not really). I luv ayesha shahber.

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’ed.
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i’m
gay (not
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really)
. I
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ayesha
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shahber
. My
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name
are
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ra
’ed.
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i’m
gay (not
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really)
. I
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luv
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ayesha
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shahber
. My
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name
are
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ra
’ed.
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i’m
gay (not
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really)
. I
The word 'luv' is informal and non-standard. Consider using an alternative.
luv
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ayesha
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shahber
. My
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name
are
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ra
’ed.
Did you mean "I’m"?
i’m
gay (not
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really)
. I
The word 'luv' is informal and non-standard. Consider using an alternative.
luv
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ayesha
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shahber
. My
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name
are
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ra
’ed.
Did you mean "I’m"?
i’m
gay (not
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really)
. I
The word 'luv' is informal and non-standard. Consider using an alternative.
luv
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ayesha
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shahber
. My
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name
are
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ra
’ed.
Did you mean "I’m"?
i’m
gay (not
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really)
. I
The word 'luv' is informal and non-standard. Consider using an alternative.
luv
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ayesha
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shahber
. My
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name
are
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ra
’ed.
Did you mean "I’m"?
i’m
gay (not
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really)
. I
The word 'luv' is informal and non-standard. Consider using an alternative.
luv
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ayesha
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shahber
. My
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name
are
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ra
’ed.
Did you mean "I’m"?
i’m
gay (not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
really)
. I
The word 'luv' is informal and non-standard. Consider using an alternative.
luv
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ayesha
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shahber
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IELTS essay My name are ra’ed. i’m gay (not really). I luv ayesha shahber.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
96 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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