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Life story of person you admire

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Of all people, my mother is the person I admire the most. At the age of forty, my mother seems to be still young. She teaches at a primary school. Teaching is hard work but she loves it. I admire my mother for a couple of reasons. First of all, my mother is a caring woman. She has devoted all her life to taking care of me. I still remember when I was six years old and I had to go to hospital for a surgery. When I first woke up, my mother was still beside me. It was a moment that I realized how much I love her. Second of all, my mother is the person I could always count on. She is always the first to listen to all of my problems and give me some useful advice. Thanks to her encouragement, I have overcome all my difficulties. In brief, I am very proud of my mother. She has always been the person who inspired me the most.

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