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My first teacher is in my studing

My first teacher is in my studing 53mAV

I will never forget the first time I met my teacher Sulton Ganjiev who works at retraining course after named Avloniy as an English teacher. His pronounciation and perfectly characters are shocked me when he entered in our group. Physically, he looks younger than us but he is average height, neither fat or thin. His plump round face is framed by barbie, his sparkling brown eyes with sunglasses show his smile and serious. He likes wearing formal, only suits. I have never seen him without suit. Although he is knowledgable person, who is very strict because he is well-behaved, gentler and fastidious among the people I know, who is the best faultless man. In my conclusion, I pround of my first teacher who arouse an initial love in English at me. Being a novice of well-known person is a fame for me.

I will never forget the first
 time I met my teacher Possible spelling mistake found.SultanFultonSuttonSalton
Sulton
Possible spelling mistake found.Sanjeev
Ganjiev
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwhich
who
 works at retraining course after named Possible spelling mistake found.Avionic
Avloniy
 as an English teacher. His Possible spelling mistake found.pronunciation
pronounciation
 and perfectly
 characters are shocked
 me when he entered in our group. Physically
, he looks younger than us This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 he is average height, neither This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chubby
fat
Use "nor" with neither.nor
or
 thin. His plump round face is framed
 by barbie, his sparkling brown eyes with sunglasses This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 his smile and serious. He likes wearing formal, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 suits. I have never This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 him without suit. Although he is Possible spelling mistake found.knowledgeable
knowledgable
 person, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwhich
who
 is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 strict This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 he is well-behaved, gentler and fastidious among the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 I know, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwhich
who
 is the best faultless This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
. In my conclusion, I Possible spelling mistake found.aroundroundgroundpoundproudPound
pround
 of my first
 teacher You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwhich
who
 arouse an initial This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 in English at me. Being a novice of well-known person is a fame for me. 