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My favourite subject. I like

My favourite subject. I like VPndD
I love languages so i like learning english and thai. I find it very interesting. It helps me enlarge my knowledge about other countries in the world and I feel great when talking to foreign people and watching movies or listening to music in English and Thai. i make a lot of new friends when i study it. i the future this languages is very important for me because if i want to work in thailand or some other country. i learn english twice a week. my teacher is Mr. Tam. and i learn thai when i have free time. i learn vocabolory, structures, speaking, listening, writing and reading. my teacher is cute and enthusiasm. i will try my best to learn two languages at the same time
I
love
languages
so
i
like learning
english
and
thai
. I find it
very
interesting. It
helps
me enlarge my knowledge about other countries in the world and I feel great when talking to foreign
people
and watching movies or listening to music in English and Thai.
i
make
a lot of
new friends when
i
study it. i the future
this
languages is
very
important
for me
because
if
i
want to work in
thailand
or
some
other country.
i
learn
english
twice a week.
my
teacher is Mr. Tam.
and
i
learn
thai
when
i
have free time.
i
learn
vocabolory
, structures, speaking, listening, writing and reading.
my
teacher is cute and enthusiasm.
i
will try my best to
learn
two languages at the same
time
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IELTS essay My favourite subject. I like

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
127 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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