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My favorite sport and sport that I want to play.

My favorite sport and sport that I want to play. bQDdP
I going to talk about my favorite sports. I have played many sports but my favorite sport is football. I like playing football with my friends when I was studied old school. We play football everyday when we finished a lunch. I play so many sports but my favorite is football. In sometimes we play at the football field near our school it was very fun at that time. But now we didn’t go out to play football anymore because of Covid-19. I have some idea to play tennis. I just want to try it, it very interesting to me. So I going to invited my friend to play with me at the weekends when we have chance to go out.
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I going
to talk about my favorite
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sports
. I have played
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sports
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my favorite
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is
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football
.
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I
like playing
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football
with my friends when I
was studied
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old
school. We
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play
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football
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everyday
when we finished a lunch. I
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play
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so
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many
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sports
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but
my favorite is
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football
. In
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sometimes
we
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play
at the
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football
field near our school it was
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very
fun at that time.
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But
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now
we didn’t go out to
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play
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football
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anymore
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because
of Covid-19. I have
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some
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idea
to
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play
tennis. I
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just
want to try it,
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it
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very
interesting to me.
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So
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I going
to
'Going to' requires the base form: "invite"
invited
my friend to
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play
with me at the weekends when we have chance to go out.

IELTS essay My favorite sport and sport that I want to play.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
121 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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