Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

My favorite place I have visited

My favorite place I have visited kY6NM
will talk about the most places I visited and I enjoy my visit to it is the city of Jeddah an indus trial and enjoyable tourist city I visited the historic city of Jeddah and enjoy the beauty of our ancient heritage, the splendor of the Hijaz decoration, its beautiful beaches, the calm the sea the Cornish and the beauty of its views its high towers it luxurious hotels and shopping in the large shopping centers in the Jaddah like Al salam mall. Jaddah mall wonderful night life there What I like most about Jeddah is its development advanced civilization Every year I visit Jeddah, I am amazed by What I see of new development Jeddah is one of the most places I really enjoy visiting
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
will
talk about the most places I visited and I enjoy my visit to it is the city of
Possible spelling mistake found.
Jeddah
an
Possible spelling mistake found.
indus trial
and enjoyable tourist city I visited the historic city of
Possible spelling mistake found.
Jeddah
and enjoy the beauty of our ancient heritage, the splendor of the
Possible spelling mistake found.
Hijaz
decoration, its
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
beaches, the calm the sea the Cornish and the beauty of its views its high towers
Did you mean "is" or "it is"?
it
luxurious hotels and shopping in the large shopping centers in the
Possible spelling mistake found.
Jaddah
like Al
Possible spelling mistake found.
salam
mall.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Jaddah
mall wonderful
This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
night life
there What I like most about
Possible spelling mistake found.
Jeddah
is its development advanced civilization Every year I visit
Possible spelling mistake found.
Jeddah
, I
am amazed
by What I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
of new development
Possible spelling mistake found.
Jeddah
is one of the most places I
really
enjoy
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
visiting

IELTS essay My favorite place I have visited

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
125 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • My favorite place I have visited