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My dream house is a detached house with a big grassed yard in front and a pool and big barbecue in backyard. It has 2 floors and an attic with a balcony on top of house. The first floor a living room and lounge with a big and modern luxury kitchen. There are four master rooms in second floor with big and luxury bathroom. T

My dream house is a detached house with a big grassed yard in front and a pool and big barbecue in backyard. It has 2 floors and an attic with a balcony on top of house. The first floor a living room and lounge with a big and modern luxury kitchen. There are four master rooms in second floor with big and luxury bathroom. T LGeb6

The process of making cherry jam can be seen in below pictures, which are included different stages from collecting and cleaning the cherry to sticking the labels and preparing the production to sell in the market. First a sheet is spread on the ground. The trees are shaken by a machine and the cherries are fallen in to the spread. Then the collected cherries are transported to the processing plant. Once the leaves and stems are removed, the cherries are washed and cleaned by water. Then the Stones are taken out of the middle of the cherries. After that, the cherries are cooked and extra ingredients like sugar, lemon juice and pectin are added to the cherries. The next stage is to check the quality of the jam. Next, the jam is put to jars. Finally a label is stuck on the jar and it`s ready to be sold in shops.

The process of making cherry jam can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in below pictures, which are included
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 stages from collecting and cleaning the cherry to sticking the labels and preparing the production to sell in the market.

First
 a sheet is spread
 on the ground. The trees are shaken
 by a machine and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
are fallen
 in to the spread. Then the collected You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
are transported
 to the processing plant. Once the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departs
leaves
 and stems are removed
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
are washed
 and cleaned by water. Then the Stones are taken
 out of the middle of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
. After that, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
are cooked
 and extra ingredients like sugar, lemon juice and pectin are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroseflamingmaroonglowingcardinalcrimson
cherries
. The next
 stage is to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 the quality of the jam. Next
, the jam is put
 to jars. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Finally,
Finally
 a label is stuck
 on the jar and You used an accent character instead of an apostrophe. Please use either "it's" or "it’s".it'sit’s
it`s
 ready to be sold
 in shops. 