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My daily works from wake up and do jobs

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I'm Mina, I usually wake up every morning at 07: 00. I also get up at 07: 20 and tidy up my bed. After that i have breakfast at 07: 30. I go to work every day. My work start at 08: 00. I usually catch bus for works. My co worker is very nice and amazing. I work in bank. I'm Mina, I usually wake up every morning at 07: 00. I also get up at 07: 20 and tidy up my bed. After that i have breakfast at 07: 30. I go to work every day. My work start at 08: 00. I usually catch bus for works. My co worker is very nice and amazing. I work in bank.
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wake up every morning at 07: 00. I
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up at 07: 20 and tidy up my bed. After that
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have breakfast at 07: 30. I go to
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work
every day. My
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work
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start
at 08: 00. I
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usually
catch bus for works. My
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co worker
is
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very
nice and amazing. I
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work
in bank. I'm
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Mina
, I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
usually
wake up every morning at 07: 00.
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I
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
up at 07: 20 and tidy up my bed. After that
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
have breakfast at 07: 30. I go to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
every day. My
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
at 08: 00. I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
usually
catch bus for works. My
This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
co worker
is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
nice and amazing. I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
in bank.
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IELTS essay My daily works from wake up and do jobs

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
122 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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