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Love myself and my family

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I think that masturbation is very crucial thing in life. I enjoy masturbating with my friends in the same room. However, this type of exercise can lead to attraction for another man. In addition, it can seem as something strange for many people in the world. First of all, the life is hard and unfair. We live in dangerous world with strange people and dogs. My family struggles to find a job and sexual life in this district. Although, we have a massive house, but we do not feel comfortable inside it.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that masturbation is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 crucial thing in life. I enjoy masturbating with my friends in the same room. However
, this type of exercise can lead to attraction for another This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
. In addition
, it can seem as something strange for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in the world. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, the life is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 and unfair. We This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hazardousrisky
dangerous
 world with strange This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 and dogs. My family struggles to find a job and sexual life in this district. Although, we have a massive This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 we do not feel comfortable inside it. 