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My city name panchkula clean and green city

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I live in the city of clean and green environment. My city name is panchkula. Which is included in the tricity with two other cities mohali and Chandigarh. Also many people use to travel to my city as it has the best livelihood and work station also is great and rule and regulations is maintained. In environment our city as the best town parks where all the people of our city comes everyday for a peace and all children used to play games with their parents and also many people do there exercise everyday. And now for those who are foodie its the city everyone has a good food court in near by areas of panchkula, as uncle Jack's is mine favorite food court as it has the best fries and shakes that used to drink in my normal days. Also in my way it has the best livelihood and fun area for living.
I
live
in the city of clean and green environment. My city name is
panchkula
. Which
is included
in the
tricity
with two other
cities
mohali
and Chandigarh.
Also
many
people
use to
travel to my city as it has the
best
livelihood and work station
also
is great and
rule
and regulations
is maintained
. In environment our city as the
best
town parks where all the
people
of our city
comes
everyday
for a peace and all children
used
to play games with their parents and
also
many
people
do there exercise
everyday
. And
now
for those who are foodie
its
the city everyone has a
good
food court in
near by
areas of
panchkula
, as uncle Jack's is mine favorite food court as it has the
best
fries and shakes that
used
to drink in my normal days.
Also
in my way it has the
best
livelihood and fun area for living.
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IELTS essay My city name panchkula clean and green city

Essay
  American English
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154 words
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