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My Brother Muhammad's Personalities

My Brother Muhammad's Personalities 7P6K5

I decided to write about my brother. Actually, he is my half-brother but not like every brother because I feel different things about him. I feel he is my friend, brother, and father. Really, I love him more than anyone on this planet. He deserves this love for his personality. He is very kind, polite, generous, tie. Also, he has charisma as leadership and a big mind. He knows when he should talk when he should do not talk, and what should say in every situation.

I decided to write about my brother. Actually, he is my half-brother This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not like every brother This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I feel This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 things about him. I feel he is my friend, brother, and father. Really
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 him more than anyone on this planet. He deserves this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 for his personality. He is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 kind, polite, generous, tie. Also
, he has charisma as leadership and a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 mind. He knows when he should talk when he should do not talk, and what should say in every situation. 

IELTS essay My Brother Muhammad's Personalities

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

86 words

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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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