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My Brother Muhammad's Personalities

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I decided to write about my brother. Actually, he is my half-brother but not like every brother because I feel different things about him. I feel he is my friend, brother, and father. Really, I love him more than anyone on this planet. He deserves this love for his personality. He is very kind, polite, generous, tie. Also, he has charisma as leadership and a big mind. He knows when he should talk when he should do not talk, and what should say in every situation.
I decided to write about my brother. Actually, he is my half-brother
but
not like every brother
because
I feel
different
things about him. I feel he is my friend, brother, and father.
Really
, I
love
him more than anyone on this planet. He deserves this
love
for his personality. He is
very
kind, polite, generous, tie.
Also
, he has charisma as leadership and a
big
mind. He knows when he should talk when he should do not talk, and what should say in every situation.
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IELTS essay My Brother Muhammad's Personalities

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
86 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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