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every people love a music. music hear mobile phone, radio, televison. music listen give a happyness. music listen and than after relexing, many type of music happy, sad. romentic, sleepy and other. we listen rock, classical, melody, folk, and many. we dance to music. i sing song at school and collage anual program. music is very importan part of life, i advaice my friend and family member to listen to music and enjoy your time
every
people
love
a
music
.
music
hear
mobile phone, radio,
televison
.
music
listen
give a
happyness
.
music
listen
and
than
after
relexing
,
many type
of
music
happy, sad.
romentic
, sleepy and other.
we
listen
rock, classical, melody, folk, and
many
.
we
dance to
music
.
i
sing song
at school and collage
anual
program.
music
is
very
importan
part of life, i
advaice
my friend and family member to
listen
to
music
and enjoy your
time
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IELTS essay music that you like enjoy most

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
74 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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