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every people love a music. music hear mobile phone, radio, televison. music listen give a happyness. music listen and than after relexing, many type of music happy, sad. romentic, sleepy and other. we listen rock, classical, melody, folk, and many. we dance to music. i sing song at school and collage anual program. music is very importan part of life, i advaice my friend and family member to listen to music and enjoy your time
'Each', 'every', 'either' and 'neither' are used with singular. Did you mean "all"?
every
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people
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love
a
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music
.
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music
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hear
mobile phone, radio,
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televison
.
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music
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listen
give a
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happyness
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
music
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listen
and
Did you mean "then"?
than
after
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relexing
,
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many type
of
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music
happy, sad.
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romentic
, sleepy and other.
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we
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listen
rock, classical, melody, folk, and
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many
.
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we
dance to
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music
.
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
sing song
at school and collage
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anual
program.
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music
is
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very
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importan
part of life, i
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advaice
my friend and family member to
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listen
to
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music
and enjoy your
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time

IELTS essay music that you like enjoy most

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
74 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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