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Music and your experience in supporting the album

Music and your experience in supporting the album MBk2L
Working on "Indigenous Theory" & "Another Day" has been a breath of fresh air, especially after being distant from the "scene" and the metal community for a very long time. The energy, the melody, the progressive nature and the overall emotion of the song hit home for me, as well as Andy's vision for the sound of the album was right up my ally and I must say I had a blast working on the bass sections. Extremely happy to see the community working as a unit and belting out such mind blowing music. Looking forward to many more of these mega collaborations.
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IELTS essay Music and your experience in supporting the album

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