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Museums and art galleries should concentrate on local works rather than showing the cultures or artworks from other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Museums and art galleries should concentrate on local works rather than showing the cultures or artworks from other countries. l6dQ

No, I disagree because nowadays it is quite peculiar for museums to showcase versatile monuments and paintings which popular all over the world. This actually intends more visitors and benefits people to educate about the history and traditions of a country. Museums with international compilation often attract tourists and can be a great way to promote tourism. For instance, the Whales Museum in India has a collection from more than 20 countries and they serve their purpose just fine.

No, I disagree This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
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 nowadays it is quite peculiar for museums to showcase versatile monuments and paintings which popular all over the world. This actually intends more visitors and benefits This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to educate about the history and traditions of a country.  Museums with international compilation This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
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 attract tourists and can be a great way to promote tourism. For instance
, the Whales Museum in India has a collection from more than 20 Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).countries, and
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 they serve their purpose This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 fine. 