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Museum has the greatest value for any individuals.

Museum has the greatest value for any individuals. Ajg1e
Museum has the greatest value for any individuals. The fundamental roles of these place is to display the ancient research as well as things, in order to contribute to the society. The principal advantage of entrance fees for museum helps in maintenance, while the main disadvantages are reduces tourism and find difficulty in affording the fees. Museum charges to the entries aids in the maintenance of the place. This is because when numerous people visit everyday, these place will definitely damage and get dirty. since these requires considerable amount, authority may find difficulties in finding museums. A classical example of this is Vishveshwarya Museum, which is is located in Bangalore. This is a well maintained museum, although they charge huge entrance money. However, this can also be covered by the taxpayers cash. Museum must use the taxpayers money and should not charge the public for their visit to the museum. In many cases juveniles need to visit these place to gain information and to be aware of how ancestors lived. In such cases, the obvious choice for the government is to make the place so that even a impoverished teenagers can also experience and learn, which in term helps the society. First instance, recently Visvesvaraya Museum removed the charges, which in intern attached thousands of foreigners to this location.
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Museum
has the greatest value for any individuals. The fundamental roles of these
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place
is to display the ancient research
as well
as things, in order to contribute to the society. The principal advantage of entrance fees for
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museum
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helps
in maintenance, while the main disadvantages are
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reduces
tourism and find difficulty in affording the fees.

Museum
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charges
to the entries aids in the maintenance of the
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place
. This is
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because
when numerous
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people
visit
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everyday
, these
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place
will definitely damage and
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get
dirty.
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since
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these requires
considerable amount, authority may find difficulties in finding
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museums
. A classical example of this is
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Vishveshwarya
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Museum
, which is
is located
in Bangalore. This is a well maintained
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museum
, although they
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charge
huge entrance money.
However
, this can
also
be covered
by the taxpayers cash.

Museum
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must
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use
the taxpayers money and should not
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charge
the public for their visit to the
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museum
. In
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many
cases juveniles need to visit these
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place
to gain information and to be aware of how ancestors
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lived
. In such cases, the obvious choice for the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
is to
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make
the
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place
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so
that even
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a
impoverished
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teenagers
can
also
experience and learn, which in term
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helps
the society.
First
instance, recently
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Visvesvaraya
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Museum
removed the
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charges
, which in intern attached thousands of foreigners to this location.
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IELTS essay Museum has the greatest value for any individuals.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
219 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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