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Now a days many people have access to computer and large number of children enjoy playing video games what are the advantages and disadvantages of playing video games for children

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IELTS essay Now a days many people have access to computer and large number of children enjoy playing video games what are the advantages and disadvantages of playing video games for children

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1 paragraphs
279 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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